Cloud does not sniffle
Or start looking for support from other people
Or expect Sephiroth to comfort him.
I should compile a list of what Cloud should never do.
Blushing is one of them.
Also, Sora is not feminine or secretly a girl or secretly in love with Riku or submissive. He got through three games on his own. GIVE HIM SOME CREDIT.
I can't argue for Leon. He has angel wings on his jacket. There are no words for his gay.
Kairi? Is awesome. She will always be more awesome than you. Live with it.
Tifa is also awesome. No need to be jealous.
Axel is not Roxas-obsessed. NO REALLY I R NOT KIDDIN HERE. I could write an essay on Axel's feelings on Roxas. But maybe later.
Also? Zemyx is the crappiest pairing I have ever read.
Write more Lexaeus/Zexion. A pairing that has substantially more canon proof than your wishy-washy fluff!Zemyx pairing.
PS - If you must, at least write them in character which nobody has succeeded in.